Eleanor Roosevelt said: “Great minds discuss ideas; average minds discuss events; small minds discus
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The idea is very important for eveyone. To be a great people like a leader, we have to have a lot of ideas. The creative idea makes people become smart and innovative. The idea made human great.
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Hello, [이름] U! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
The idea is very important for eveyone.
>>> The idea is very important for everyone.
To be a great people like a leader, we have to have a lot of ideas.
>>> CORRECT!
The creative idea makes people become smart and innovative.
>>> Creative idea makes people become smart and innovative.
The idea made human great.
>>> The idea made humans great.
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