Election
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: [ESSAY] What\'s your thought on the election in Seoul?
I can\'t do the election so I am not interested of it.
But when I became an adult, I want to candidate on some election.
Wait! But I don\'t want to candidate on president election!
My dream job isn\'t a president!
My conclusion is: I am not interested of election! : D : P : p : )
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Theme: [ESSAY] What\'s your thought on the election in Seoul?
I can\'t do the election so I am not interested of it.
>> I can\'t vote yet so I\'m not really interested in the election in Seoul.
But when I became an adult, I want to candidate on some election.
>> But when I become an adult, I want to be a political candidate.
Wait! But I don\'t want to candidate on president election!
>> Wait! But I don\'t want to be a presidential candidate!
My dream job isn\'t a president!
>> correct
My conclusion is: I am not interested of election! : D : P : p : )
>> My conclusion is: I am not interested in the election!
>> or: In conclusion, I am not interested in the election!
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