Election
학생이 쓴 원문
Honesty is the importance of election. Candidates say many election pledges. It is important that candidates should be honest to pledges. However, it is hard to confirm it, so voter know about their past. We should search about candidates, their pledges, and their past. But I\'m not sure of the politician, because many politicains changed when they had the power. Nevertheless we must vote, because it is the process of democracy, and it will be the history.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you once again for submitting your homework.
It\'s true that we should know everything about a politician who is running for a position.
I know that it\'s hard to trust them but as you said, we still need to vote because it is part of our democracy.
I hope that the election in your country will be peaceful and safe. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
Candidates say many election pledges.
>> CORRECT.
It is important that candidates should be honest to pledges.
>> CORRECT.
However, it is hard to confirm it, so voter know about their past.
>> However, it is hard to confirm it so a voter should know about their past.
We should search about candidates, their pledges, and their past.
>> CORRECT.
But I\'m not sure of the politician, because many politicains changed when they had the power.
>> But I\'m not sure of the politician because many politicians change when they have the power.
Nevertheless we must vote, because it is the process of democracy, and it will be the history.
>> CORRECT.
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