Election at my school.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Today there was a election about electing our president for our school.
>> Today, there was an election for school president in our school.
After 5class freshmen and second-year students all went to gym. And the president candidates had a speech.
>> After the class, all freshmen and second-year students all went to the gym and the president had a speech.
We are electing one president in second year one second president in second year and one second president in freshmen.
>> We elected one president and a vice-president from second year and another vice-president from freshmen.
The candidate was president was 3 and second president was 1.
>> There were 3 presidential candidate and one vice president.
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