electric vehicles are solutions to global pollution
학생이 쓴 원문
ESSAY: To what extent are electric vehicles a solution to global pollution? Briefly explain your answer.
I believe that electric vehicles can be a good solution to prevent pollution.
Firstly electric vehicles are electric power on be half of fossil fuel. In means that electric vehicles produce less CO2 than usual internal combustion engine.
Secondly electric vehicles are using motor instead of internal combustion engine. As far as I know motor is more efficiency than internal combustion engine. It meas if you use electric vehicles you can save more energy than internal combustion engine.
Those are the reason why I am thinking electric vehicles are solutions to global pollution.
**PS. I would like to change class time afterwards. Because EU winter time was finished by 28th of March. So Can I change my class time to 13:00 in Korea time with you?If not, please tell me in today\'s class.
강사 첨삭
Good evening Sir JY~! ^^ Thanks for doing your essay. With regards to your class schedule, please contact our manager for the changes you prefer. Thank you so much.
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I believe that electric vehicles can be a good solution to prevent pollution.
I believe that electric vehicles can be a good solution to prevent pollution.
>>> CORRECT
Firstly, electric vehicles are electric power on be half of fossil fuel.
Firstly, electric vehicles are electric power on be half of fossil fuel.
>>> CORRECT
In means that electric vehicles produce less CO2 than usual internal combustion engine.
>>> CORRECT
Secondly electric vehicles are using motors instead of internal combustion engine.
Secondly electric vehicles are using motors instead of internal combustion engine.
>>> CORRECT
As far as I know motor is more efficiency than internal combustion engine.
>>> As far as I know motor is more efficient than internal combustion engine.
It means if you use electric vehicles you can save more energy than internal combustion engine.
>>> It means if you use electric vehicles, you can save more energy than internal combustion engine.
Those are the reason why I am thinking electric vehicles are solutions to global pollution.
Those are the reason why I am thinking electric vehicles are solutions to global pollution.
>>> CORRECT
**PS. I would like to change my class time afterwards. Because in EU winter time is finished on 28th of March. So can I change my class time to 13:00 in Korea time with you ?If not, please tell me in today\'s class.
**PS. I would like to change my class time afterwards. Because in EU winter time is finished on 28th of March. So can I change my class time to 13:00 in Korea time with you ?If not, please tell me in today\'s class.
( Sir JY please contact the managers for your concern. Have a wonderful day! ^^ )
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