electricity is a very good invention.
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The greatest invention is one that we use for human benefit.
>>CORRECT
OR>>The most significant invention is the one utilized for the well-being of humanity.
So electricity is a very good invention.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Indeed, electricity is a remarkable invention.
If it weren\'t for electricity, everything would have taken a long time, so I\'m very grateful for the convenience of electricity.
>>If it weren\'t for electricity, tasks would take much longer to complete, so I\'m truly grateful for the convenience it provides.
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