Electronic Eavesdropping on the Rise
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1. What is your opinion about the recording devices that are popular nowadays?
For the development of technology, the recording devices have been also improved its quality.
>> The recording devices\' quality had been improve for the development of technology.
I think if this devices are well used to proper purpose, this could useful in many situation.
>> I think if these devices are well used to its proper purpose, this could be useful in many situations.
Problem is when it was used in improper situation.
>> The problem is when it was used in an improper situation.
2. What do you think about the parents who sew bugs into the clothes or bags of their children?
I think this is too much interfere to their child and his/her surroundings.
>> I think this is too much to interfere to their child and his/her surroundings.
It should be used in proper situation.
>> It should be used in proper situations.
3. Some people say that the only people who need privacy are people who are doing something illegal. Do you agree or disagree? Why?
I disagree. The privacy is totally not related to legal or illegal.
>> I disagree. The privacy is totally not related on being legal or illegal.
Just for finding his or her illegal problem, using recording device should not be legalized because it is trespass one\'s privacy by itself.
>> The use recording devices should not be legalized. Because, it is a trespass on one\'s privacy by itself just for the search his or her illegal problem
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