Elements
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Theme: [ESSAY] Do you like watching films with elements of a musical?
Yes, I do!
I have seen film like that.
It was so beautiful.
I thout it was a musical film but it was an ordinary film!
I like watching that kind of films!
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your first composition this week, Clair!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] Do you like watching films with elements of a musical?
Yes, I do!
>> or: Certainly!
I have seen film like that.
>> I have seen a film like that.
It was so beautiful.
>> correct
>> or: I found it very beautiful.
I thout it was a musical film but it was an ordinary film!
>> I thought it was a musical film but it was just an ordinary one.
I like watching that kind of films!
>> I like watching that kind of film.
>> or: I enjoy watching that type of movie.
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