Ella teacher!
학생이 쓴 원문
When you called me yesterday, at the moment I was sleeping.
When I waked up, it was pm 10.30.
According to letter comment of 18th November, I try to put punchuation and comma to context. Please give me a big hand.
After a first telephone class, I was surprised at my pronunciation and ability of English conversation because it was very poor.
As your comment, I will try to correct worng pronunciations and commit two new words to memory everyday.
Anyway, I would like to get along with you well for 4 months which I was learned.
Questions.
1) Maintain a book where you can not down the new words everyday.
Above sentence, "where" is right? I think that it is "which".
2) A few minutes each way
How can I understand the meaning of each way?
See you later !
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I am so glad that you are motivated to learn English with me. Do not be much worried about your pronunciation because we can work on that well. I will surely try my best to help you improve your English skill. Take care! ^_^
I hope I can finally talk to you tonight. Maybe try setting your alarm clock if you will sleep so you will wake up on our class time.hehehe.
fierce&love,
~Ella^^
MY CORRECTIONS^^:
Ella teacher!
>> Teacher Ella!
When you called me yesterday, at the moment I was sleeping.
>> I was sleeping when you called me up yesterday.
When I waked up, it was pm 10.30.
>>When I woke up, it was already 10:30 pm.
>> I woke up at 10:30 pm
According to letter comment of 18th November, I try to put punchuation and comma to context. Please give me a big hand.
>> You advised that I have to use the right punctuation marks. I hope that you can help me with this.
>>According to the Novemeber 17th composition correction, you advised thatI have to use the correct punctuation marks. I hope you can give me an hand on this.
After a first telephone class, I was surprised at my pronunciation and ability of English conversation because it was very poor.
>> The first time I had class with you, I was surprised because I need to improve my English skill especially when it comes to my pronunciation.
As your comment, I will try to correct worng pronunciations and commit two new words to memory everyday.
>> Regarding your class comment, I will try my best to work on my pronunciation and learn at least 2 new vocabulary everyday.
Anyway, I would like to get along with you well for 4 months which I was learned.
>> Anyway, I also hope to get along well with you for 4 months and I believe that I can learn a lot.
Questions.1) Maintain a book where you can not down the new words everyday.Above sentence, "where" is right? I think that it is "which".
>> MAintain a book where you can note down the new words everyday.
>>Maintain a book in which you can note down the new words everyday.
>>[You can use either where or which. They are both correct but you have to add the preposition 'in' if you will use 'which'. And I used 'where' because 'book' was used in the sentence as the place where I will write down my notes. :)]
2) A few minutes each wayHow can I understand the meaning of each way?
>>[Oh! Sorry about that Mr. [이름]. It was a typographical error.hehehe. It should be "a few minutes each day".]
See you later !
>> Correct
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