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2017-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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Dear [Name]. kim, I am writing a e-mail about the setback of delivery of our project for 2 days. I should send a new software which is enabled the logic you requested 2 weeks ago by 17th Oct. But during the development, we were found a serious logic bug which was suggested by you and decide to change this logic a little bit. We wanted to discuss this changing with your. but we couldn't contact you with any method. As you already know, The full car test will be scheduled next Monday and you should also check your new logic before that day. So, we decide to change your logic without your opinion. but we are convinced that you accept our change. We have another plan tomorrow in your company. So I will go to the quality department of Powertrain division of your company. and I also will drop by you place and share this test result to let you know well. it is very very complicated. See you tomorrow.

강사 첨삭

Hi Hee!

I hope you are having a great time today. Thank you for letting me help you through compositions. I hope this would be a great help for you.

See you^^

~T. Eunice


Dear [Name]. kim,
>> Dear [Name]. [Name],

 I am writing a e-mail about the setback of delivery of our project for 2 days.
>> I am writing an e-mail about the delay in delivering our project for two days.

 I should send a new software which is enabled the logic you requested 2 weeks ago by 17th Oct.
>> I should send a new software which enabled the logic you requested two weeks ago on the 17th of October.
 But during the development, we were found a serious logic bug which was suggested by you and decide to change this logic a little bit.
>> But during the development, we found a serious logic bug which was suggested by you and we decided to change this logic a little bit.
 We wanted to discuss this changing with your. but we couldn\'t contact you with any method.
>> We wanted to discuss this matter with you but we couldn\'t contact you in any method.
 As you already know, The full car test will be scheduled next Monday and you should also check your new logic before that day.
>> Correct!
 So, we decide to change your logic without your opinion. but we are convinced that you accept our change.
>> So, we decided to change the logic without your consent but we are convinced that you will accept the changes.
 We have another plan tomorrow in your company.
>> We have another plan for your company.
 So I will go to the quality department of Powertrain division of your company. and I also will drop by you place and share this test result to let you know well. it is very very complicated.
>> I will go to the quality department of Powertrain division of your company and I will also drop by your place and share this test result to let you know well.
 it is very very complicated.
>> It\'s a very complicated logic.
 See you tomorrow. 
>> Correct!

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