Email correction 2 (Polite English pls)

For the meeting, I thought that MSRT would like to invite faculty members from universities in Teheran city to the MSRT meeting room so that all participants from two countries can join a meeting and share our presentation together. In this case, Korean participants doesn't need to visit local universities in Teheran. If I am wrong, please let me know your brief plan and I am also open for all kind of suggestions. Lastely, Ms. [Name] is going to update our confirmed plan to the Ministry of Foreign Affairs. Please do not hesitate to contact us if you need any clafications. Best Regards, [이름]

Hi, Mr. [이름]! ^^ I\'m done checking your letter. I hope your transaction with them would be successful. See you again on Monday. ^^ Enjoy  your Friday and your weekend. Good day and God bless. ~Teacher Charry ^^ For the meeting, I thought that MSRT would like to invite faculty members from universities in Teheran city to the MSRT meeting room so that all participants from two countries can join a meeting and share our presentation together. >> CORRECT! In this case, Korean participants doesn\'t need to visit local universities in Teheran. >> In this case, Korean participants don\'t need to visit the local universities in Teheran. If I am wrong, please let me know your brief plan and I am also open for all kind of suggestions.>> In case I am wrong, please let me know about your brief plan. I am also open for all kinds of suggestions.Lastely, Ms. [Name] is going to update our confirmed plan to the Ministry of Foreign Affairs.>> Lastly, Ms. [Name] is going to update our confirmed plan to the Ministry of Foreign Affairs.Please do not hesitate to contact us if you need any clafications.>> Please do not hesitate to contact us if you have questions or clarifications.Best Regards,Kyungnam Yun >> CORRECT! OR >> Respectfully yours, Kyungnam Yun