Email to foreigner

Hi, Sally!! I had good time with you. My first class of Phone English was funny. I usually do extra work. But, I'll try to prepare our class. Because I'd like to speak English fluently. I need to your help. Please help me^^ I did my homework, and want to check my email as belew. Dear [Name]. H(He is foreigner professor related my work.) I am sorry for my late reply. Last week, I attended a conference. I will inform you about the details of our contract later. Please let me know how long will you stay in Korea. The ABC company will hold a seminar to get the infornation about ocean forecasting. The subject of this seminar is ocean forecasting system including object, present condition, method, application. The date of this seminar is 14 or 15th June and presentation time is 30-40 minutes. We would like to ask you to prepare for this presentation. We should be greatly indebted if you would do that. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you. Sincerely yours.

Hello my dear student!^^I am pleased to read your message for me. To assist your English learning further, I have checked the grammar of your letter as well as the word spellings. Thank you for doing your homework. I am deeply moved by your kindness and effort. Keep going! Take care and enjoy the rest of the day! ~Teacher Sally Hi, Sally!! >> Hi, Sally! (Please don\'t use an extra punctuation mark)I had good time with you.>> I had a good time with you. My first class of Phone English was funny. >>My first class of phone English was funny. I usually do extra work.>> I usually do an extra work. But, I\'ll try to prepare our class. Because I\'d like to speak English fluently. >> But, I\'ll try to prepare for our class because I\'d like to speak English fluently.I need to your help. Please help me^^>> I need your help so please help me.I did my homework, and want to check my email as belew. >> I did my homework, and I want you to check my email written below. Dear [Name]. H(He is foreigner professor related my work.) >> Dear [Name], (He is the foreigner professor who is related to my work.)I am sorry for my late reply. Last week, I attended a conference.>>Correct! I will inform you about the details of our contract later.>>Correct! Please let me know how long will you stay in Korea.>> Please let me know how long you will stay in Korea. The ABC company will hold a seminar to get the infornation about ocean forecasting.>>Correct! The subject of this seminar is ocean forecasting system including object, present condition, method, application.>> The subject of this seminar is ocean forecasting system which includes: the object, present condition, method, and application. The date of this seminar is 14 or 15th June and presentation time is 30-40 minutes.>> The date of this seminar will be on the 14th or 15th of June and the presentation time is 30-40 minutes. We would like to ask you to prepare for this presentation. >>Correct! We should be greatly indebted if you would do that.>>Correct! I\'m looking forward to hearing from you.>>Correct! Thank you. >>Correct! Sincerely yours. >>Correct!