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I'm sorry to turn off my camera. Our call time is late so I usually tired and dress badly. I'd like to ask for your understanding. See you tomorrow.
Dear [Name]. A and Prof. B
In 14th of June, we are going to pick Prof. B up at 11:15am at Gimpo airport,
and then go to Incheon airport to pick Prof. A up by car. After the seminar in the ABC company, we will have dinner together, and we will make a contract with you in 15th of June. But you can do whatever you like to do. We are always okay, so you can come to our office anytime you like(in the late afternoon on 14th or in the morning on 15th). We are looking forward to meeting you.
And Prefessor A, We did what you told me, so we got the normal results. And we modified some source code to decrease the computing time, the results of it are also attached in this mail. When you visit our office, we want to receive advice from you about the data assimilation, because we don't know it well. Thank you very much for your help.
[이름].
강사 첨삭
Hi there! How are you now? Were you able to take a rest? Don\'t worry about me, I do understand that you were really tired yesterday. I hope you are feeling relaxed now. I will talk to you later. See you!
^^T.Sally^..
Here are my corrections for you:
I\'m sorry to turn off my camera.
>>I am sorry I turned off my camera.
Our call time is late so I usually tired and dress badly.
>>Our class time is late so I usually feel tired and in bad shape.
I\'d like to ask for your understanding.
>>CORRECT
See you tomorrow.
>>CORRECT
>>I will see you tomorrow.
Dear [Name]. A and Prof. B
>>Dear [Name] A and Prof B,
In 14th of June, we are going to pick Prof. B up at 11:15am at Gimpo airport,
>>On June 14, we are going to pick Prof. B at 11:15 am at Gimpo Airport.
and then go to Incheon airport to pick Prof. A up by car.
>>After that, we will go to Incheon Airport to pick Prof. A using a car.
After the seminar in the ABC company, we will have dinner together, and we will make a contract with you in 15th of June.
>>After the seminar at the ABS company, we will be having a dinner together and we will make the contract with you in June 15.
But you can do whatever you like to do.
>>CORRECT
We are always okay, so you can come to our office anytime you like(in the late afternoon on 14th or in the morning on 15th).
>>We are always okay with that, and you can visit our office anytime in the afternoon of June 14 and morning of June 15.
We are looking forward to meeting you.
>>CORRECT
And Prefessor A, We did what you told me, so we got the normal results.
>>And Prof. A, we did what you told us so we got the correct result.
And we modified some source code to decrease the computing time, the results of it are also attached in this mail.
>>We modified some source code to decrease the computing time and the result is attached with this e-mail.
When you visit our office, we want to receive advice from you about the data assimilation, because we don\'t know it well.
>>When you visit our office, we would want you to give us some advise about data assimilation for we don\'t know it well.
Thank you very much for your help.
>>CORRECT
[이름].
>>CORRECT
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