Embarrasing experience
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I am used to take a subway, when I move to other place. One day, I took the subway, at that time I wore a high heel, so I had a footache. I begun to find seat. However,as there were many people, so there weren't seat which I can sit. Whenever the subway arrived at the station, I searched seat, finally I found one seat near from me. I walked to there to sit on the seat. But one ma'am pushed me away from seat, and she sat that . After all, I lost my seat.
I disappointed, and I had to endure my footache.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Oh! I'm sorry to hear that. That's really a bad day. You should have looked
for a man and sat on his lap instead haha. Just kidding. Well , hopefully that will not happen again right?
You better be careful next time.
Monica
I am used to take a subway, when I move to other place.
>>>correct
One day, I took the subway, at that time I wore a high heel, so I had a footache.
>>>correct
I begun to find seat. However,as there were many people, so there weren't seat which I can sit.
>>>I begun looking for a seat but there was no available at that time because there's a lot of people.
Whenever the subway arrived at the station, I searched seat, finally I found one seat near from me.
>>>Whenever the subway reaches a station, I search for a vacant seat and luckily I found one near me.
I walked to there to sit on the seat. But one ma'am pushed me away from seat, and she sat that . After all, I lost my seat.
>>>I walked toward the vacant seat but a woman pushed me and sat on that vacant seat. I disappointed, and I had to endure my footache.
>>>I was disappointed and had to endure my footache.
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