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Hi Cathy!
You are active as you said. You do things on your own for you to learn.Nice.^^
Have a goodnight sleep.
-T, Naomi
when I was young I really want to work in green cross company
>>When I was young, I really want to work in Green Cross company.
so I went to hospital once a month to know the recognition of greenhouse
>>So I went to hospital once a month to know the recognition about greenhouse.
also I always read the news about the pharmaceutical company
>>Also, I always read the news about the pharmaceutical company.
and I met a sales person of pharmaceutical company.
>>And I met a sales person of the pharmaceutical company.
I was able to realize that how to communicate customers.
>>I was able to realize how to communicate to customers.
so I paticipated in many international activities
>>So i participated in many international activities.
I am sure that my interest and experience coincide with green cross
>>I am sure that my interest and experience coincide with Green Cross.
so I appy for green cross
>>So, I applied for Green Cross.
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