emergency

2020-08-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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I act differently depending on the type of emergency. If it too urgent, of course, apologize and move. Otherwise, I come out of the place more slowly. There are so many things happening in life. We need mutual consideration and understanding. I promise I`ll keep it Sometimes things happen that are forgotten and unexpected. So these days, I don`t make an appointment as much as possible.

강사 첨삭

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Here are your corrections:

I act differently depending on the type of emergency.
>> CORRECT

If it too urgent, of course, apologize and move.
>> If it\'s urgent, of course, I will apologize then move.

Otherwise, I come out of the place more slowly.
>> Otherwise, I will come out of the place slower.

There are so many things happening in life.
>> CORRECT

We need mutual consideration and understanding.
>> CORRECT

I promise I`ll keep it
>> CORRECT

Sometimes things happen that are forgotten and unexpected.
>> Sometimes, unexpected things happen that are left forgotten.

So these days, I don`t make an appointment as much as possible.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> So these days, I don\'t make appointments as much as possible.

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