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2014-04-09 · 첨삭 강사 Naomi

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good morning my name is [이름] [이름] [이름] apply for green cross sales part I think I have two ability as salse first, I have strong tenacity my personality is that when I am in trouble, I endeavor to overcome this trouble based on my personality, I led my team to victory second I have good communication skill when I went to china as a exchange student my classmate don’t want to practice chrous tournament so I encouraged them and motivated them wo could complete our performance perfectly based on these skills I will increase sales

강사 첨삭

Hi Cathy! Happy Wednesday!

 

Nice answers. Good luck on your interview. Just relax OK.^^

And I know you can do it.

 

Bye bye.

 

-T. Naomi

 

good morning my name is [이름] [이름] [이름] apply for green cross sales part

>>Good morning. My name is [이름] [이름] [이름] applying for Green Cross Sales part.

>>Good morning. My name is [이름] [이름] [이름] applying for the position of _________in Green Cross Sales part.


I think I have two ability as salse

>>I think I have two assets in sales.
first, I have strong tenacity

>>First, I have strong tenacity.
my personality is that when I am in trouble, I endeavor to overcome this trouble

>>My personality is that when I am in trouble, I endeavor to overcome this trouble.
based on my personality, I led my team to victory

>>Based on my personality, I lead my team to victory.
second I have good communication skill

>>Second, I have good communication skill.
when I went to china as a exchange student
my classmate don’t want to practice chrous tournament

>>When I went to China as an exchange student, my classmate doesn\'t want to practice
so I encouraged them and motivated them

>>So I encouraged them and motivated them.
wo could complete our performance perfectly

>>Who could complete our performance perfectly.
based on these skills I will increase sales

>>Beased on these skills I believe I will increase the sales.

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