Emergency call unit in the elevator.
학생이 쓴 원문
.Today, I visited a certain university to inspect the elevator.
The inspection of the elevator is alway boring.
I have to repeat same process everyday for passenger's safety.
Some time it makes me crazy because of it's routine
But I know that this is my job and I have to do this procedure.
Today's issue was the emergency call units in the elevator.
When the elevator passenger is confined in the car (this car means the inside of the elevator)
A person confined in the car need to connect to the engineer or helper.
So. The installment of emergency call units in the elevator is a mandatory in korea
And more if no one receive the emergency call from a passenger, this unit has to be connected to the external line such as elevator customer center or fire station.
Korea is the only one country where has this kind of unique system.
Thank for this good and unique system, the rate of the accident of confine elevator in korea quite low compared to other country.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mr. [Name]! ^^
Thank you very much for sharing about this unique system.
I am truly amazed. I wish my government would also pay attention to this detail.
Power interruptions happen a lot in my country and many elevator passengers get stranded inside from time to time.
I think this system is a very good way to ensure that the passengers are always safe and that no one gets hurt when they get stranded.
I think even if this menial task of yours is boring, it is still very important because lives are at stake. ^^
Your job is not easy Mr. Adriano and I salute you for sticking to the routine even if you find it boring.
You\'ve probably saved more lives than most people have. ^^
I hope you are having a good time at work.
See you again tomorrow.
Take care always.
~Teacher Charry (^_^)/
Today, I visited a certain university to inspect the elevator. >> CORRECT!
OR >> I visited a certain university today to inspect the elevator.
The inspection of the elevator is alway boring.
>> The inspection of the elevator is always boring.
OR >> Inspecting elevators is always boring.
I have to repeat same process everyday for passenger\'s safety.
>> I have to repeat the same process everyday for the passengers\' safety. Some time it makes me crazy because of it\'s routine
>> Sometimes it makes me crazy because it\'s already a routine.But I know that this is my job and I have to do this procedure.>> CORRECT!
OR >> But I know that this is part of my job and I have to follow the protocol.Today\'s issue was the emergency call units in the elevator.>> Today\'s issue is all about the emergency call units in the elevator.When the elevator passenger is confined in the car (this car means the inside of the elevator) A person confined in the car need to connect to the engineer or helper.
>> When the elevator passenger is confined in the car (this car means inside the elevator), the person confined in the car needs to connect to the engineer or helper.So. The installment of emergency call units in the elevator is a mandatory in korea
>> So, the installment of emergency call units in the elevator is mandatory in Korea.And more if no one receive the emergency call from a passenger, this unit has to be connected to the external line such as elevator customer center or fire station. >> What\'s more is that, if no one received the emergency call from a passenger, this unit automatically connects to the external line such as the elevator customer center or the fire station. Korea is the only one country where has this kind of unique system.>> Korea is the only country that has this kind of unique system.Thank for this good and unique system, the rate of the accident of confine elevator in korea quite low compared to other country.
>> Thanks to this good and unique system, the rate of accident among passengers confined in elevators in Korea is far lower compared to other countries.
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