Emotion and action in a movie about the end of the world
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I think it\'s both, but I think the emotions are a little bit higher. The destruction of the world is a big thing that came all of a sudden, so I think the emotions of the characters will be considered important. In the destruction of the world, there are cases where the same humans fight without necessarily having an action while fighting against outside things. In this case, we focus on the action, but we pay attention to the fact that they fought each other. This corresponds to emotions.
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I think it\'s both, but I think the emotions are a little bit higher.
>> I think it’s both, but emotions are slightly more important.
OR >> I think both are important, but emotions matter a bit more.
The destruction of the world is a big thing that came all of a sudden, so I think the emotions of the characters will be considered important.
>> The destruction of the world is a huge event that happens suddenly, so the characters’ emotions become very important.
OR >> When the world suddenly ends, people’s feelings become really important.
In the destruction of the world, there are cases where the same humans fight without necessarily having an action while fighting against outside things.
>> In these situations, people sometimes fight each other instead of focusing only on external threats.
In this case, we focus on the action, but we pay attention to the fact that they fought each other. This corresponds to emotions.
>> While there is action, we also pay attention to the conflicts between people, which are connected to their emotions.
OR >> Even though there’s a lot of action, people often fight each other too, and that’s where the emotional part comes in.
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