emotion of hate
학생이 쓴 원문
I think emotion pf hate will never disappear.
because the society is fierce and we have to competetion always.
But, I try to understand to other peoples doing and think about the reason for the onother peoples.
so that, I can control my emotion of hate.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon [이름]!
I do not like that emotion.
I always try to be happy and ignore things that would make me feel sad, angry, etc.
I think emotion pf hate will never disappear.
>>> I think hate feelings will never disappear.
because the society is fierce and we have to competetion always.
>>> This is because society is fierce and we always have to compete.
But, I try to understand to other peoples doing and think about the reason for the onother peoples.
>>> But I try to understand why people do such and think of the reasons why.
so that, I can control my emotion of hate.
>>> In that way, I can control my emotion.
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