Employment changes

This graph illustrates the number of people employed in five different industries in 1990 and 2005. As you can see from this graph, the number of people employed in registered nurse was the highest, followed by that of teacher and computer programs. Also,the number of lawyers was slightly lower than that of computer programmers and there was the lowest number of people employed in farmers. However, there were quite significant changes in employment in 2005. The most significant change is computer programmers. Although the number in 1990was the lowest, it was the second highest along with that of teachrs.Another interesting change is farmers. While the number in other industries increased gradually the number of people employed in farmer decreased shaply.In addition, the number of registered nurses remained the hightest among other industries. We can assume that people became more intereested in professional career.

Hi Sophia!! ^_^ Good job on this composition!  You did great with your sentences. I just provided some corrections on some of your sentences. You can just check it. See you in class. ^_^     The graph illustrates the number of people employed in five different industries in 1990 and 2005. >> Correct! As you can see from this graph, in 1990, the number of people employed in registered nurse was the highest, followed by that of teachers and computer programs. >> Correct! Also, the number of lawyers was slightly lower than that of computer programmers. >> Correct! and there was the lowest number of people employed in farmers. >> The lowest number of people employed are that of with the farmers. However, there were quite significant changes in employment in 2005. >> Correct! The most significant change is computer programmers. >> Correct! Although the number in 1990 was the lowest, it was the second highest along with that of teachers. >> Correct! Another interesting change is farmers. >> Another interesting change are the farmers. While the number in other industries increased gradually the number of people employed in farmers decreased sharply. >> Correct! In addition, the number of registered nurses remained the highest among other industries. >> Correct! We can assume that people became more interested in professional career. >> Correct!