Encourge My senior officer
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Today, I had dinner with my senior officer who wasn't promoted to director second time so far. I and some colleagues meet together to encourge him, but we didn't mentioned about promotion. He pretended to be okay. We drank little, and talked about our routine life such like low salary, hard work, etc. Even though we had never talked about his promotion, but we sent him our fighting. By the way, I came back home late again, two days straight. My wife seemed to be not okay. To be honest, I have an another promoise tommorow. It is important meeting with having dinner. I have to attend it. So I'm afraid of my wife.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Thank you for the message.
Maybe you just need to let your wife know that your social meeting with your colleagues is important to your work.
And, maybe, next time, try to go home before midnight!
See you tomorrow!
T. Joey
Here are my corrections today:
Today, I had dinner with my senior officer who wasn't promoted to director second time so far.
>>> Today, I had dinner with my senior officer who wasn't promoted to director for the second time.
I and some colleagues meet together to encourge him, but we didn't mentioned about promotion.
>>> Some of my colleagues and I went with him to support him and we didn't mention the promotion anymore.
He pretended to be okay.
>>> Correct!
We drank little, and talked about our routine life such like low salary, hard work, etc.
>>We drank a little and talked about our daily work routine such as low salary, heavy work, etc.
Even though we had never talked about his promotion, but we sent him our fighting.
>>> Even though we didn't talk about his failed promotion, we gave him our encouragements.
By the way, I came back home late again, two days straight.
>>> By the way, I went home late again, two days straight.
My wife seemed to be not okay.
>>> My wife seemed not okay about it.
To be honest, I have an another promoise tommorow. It is important meeting with having dinner. I have to attend it. So I'm afraid of my wife.
>>> Honestly, I have another dinner meeting tomorrow. I have to attend it. I'm scared of my wife's reaction about it.
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