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2010-10-20 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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From eight am. I started to keep drinking a cup of the prescribed liquid. I had to drink up four liters of liquid for cleansing down whole of my digestive organs: stomach, belly, and large intestine. The nurse had told me that I should drink out the whole liquid within two hours; nevertheless it took more than three hours to empty up its container. It was really nauseating to gulp liquid every ten minutes. At first time when I swallowed a cup of it, I was almost vomit so I chewed a piece of gum right after that. And once I had the first and second cup of it I had to rush to the toilet. Likewise I repeated these activities until I finished drinking it out. So my whole digestive organ became totally emptied. However, I didn’t feel hungry nor dizzy at all but light!

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss. [Name], How are you? I know that this process is not an easy way to cleanse your digestive system but you need to for you to feel much better. Just have more patience for you to get good result J Happy Tuesday!!   From eight am. I started to keep drinking a cup of the prescribed liquid. >>From 8a.m., I started to drink a cup of prescribed liquid. I had to drink up four liters of liquid for cleansing down whole of my digestive organs: stomach, belly, and large intestine. >>I have to drink four litters of liquid to cleanse my digestive organs. The nurse had told me that I should drink out the whole liquid within two hours; >>The nurse told me that I should finish it in two hours. Nevertheless it took more than three hours to empty up its container. >>It took me more than three hours to finish it. It was really nauseating to gulp liquid every ten minutes. >>Correct!! At first time when I swallowed a cup of it, >>At first, when I drank a cup of it, I was almost vomit so I chewed a piece of gum right after that. >>I almost vomit so I chewed a piece of gum right after that.And once I had the first and second cup of it I had to rush to the toilet. >>Having my first and second cup of it, I had to rush to the toilet. Likewise I repeated these activities until I finished drinking it out. >>I need to repeat this activity every day, So my whole digestive organ became totally emptied. >>So that my whole digestive organ will be totally empty. However, I didn’t feel hungry nor dizzy at all but light! >>However, I didn’t feel hungry nor dizzy at all, instead I feel lighter.

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