ENERGY!
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t have the energy to play loud all day. Playing loudly all the time drains my energy and makes me want to go home. I have a few friends who I have to play with loudly and vigorously all day, and it\'s fun when I meet them, but it\'s also hard.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I don\'t have the energy to play loud all day.
>>> CORRECT!
Playing loudly all the time drains my energy and makes me want to go home.
>>> CORRECT!
I have a few friends who I have to play with loudly and vigorously all day, and it\'s fun when I meet them, but it\'s also hard.
>>> CORRECT!
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