Englich fluency is important to me.

Hello [이름]. Thank you for sending this in. English as a foreign language is definitely difficult to learn. As a matter of fact, learning any language is difficult. However, you have the drive and motivation to keep practicing and wanting to improve on the language, it will happen. Good luck!  

- T. Beth

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English fluency is the one of most important tasks for me.

>>>  English fluency is one of the most important tasks for me.

Because I really want to work abroad, and one of the most important parts to get the job in the other nation is language.

>>>   correct

Also it is clear that the most important language in the world is absolutely English.

>>>  It is also clear that the most important language in the world is absolutely English. 

So I want to improve it. 

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 For this, when i want to say something i try not to make sentence in Korean.

>>>  correct   (For this, when I want to say something I try not to make a sentence in Korean.) 

I attempted but it was too hard to do it at the very first time.

>>>  OR: I attempted but it was too hard to do it at first. 

However I didn’t give up to do it so now I can make sentences from English right away.

>>>  However, I didn’t give up to do it so now I can make sentences in English right away.  

The more the hardest one is the process of making sentences is really different different reason but when I try to make it again and again and I feel that I I have already improved my skill.

>>>  One of the hardest parts of the process of making sentences is they are really different, but when I try to do it again and again I feel that I have already improved my skill. 

But it is not enough, it doesn’t fulfill the expectations which I thought.

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So I must focus on making my English fluency better than before.

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