English
학생이 쓴 원문
In your country, why is English important?
I haven\'t thought about that. I guess that English is common language in the world.
Nowadays we lives in global world. Korea has developed as cooperating with America.
Many bussinesses are related to America or contries using English.
We are learning many new knowledges from America. For example, all medical text book and papers are written by English.
So English is very important. To go to the university, students should be good at English.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]!
I very much agree with Ms. [Name]. So, lets have fun learning English :).
~Lucy
I haven\'t thought about that.
>>CORRECT!
I guess that English is common language in the world.
>>CORRECT!
Nowadays we lives in global world.>>Nowadays we live in a global world.
Korea has developed as cooperating with America.
>> Korea has developed a cooperation with America.
Many bussinesses are related to America or contries using English.
Many bussinesses are related to America or contries using English.
>>Many bussinesses are related to America or countries using English.
We are learning many new knowledges from America.
>>CORRECT!
For example, all medical text book and papers are written by English.
>>CORRECT!
>>For example, all medical text book and papers are written in English.
So English is very important. >>CORRECT!
To go to the university, students should be good at English.
>>CORRECT!
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