english academy
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In the morning I went to my english academy to study grammer.
Today. we had a funny game. First had divided into teams. Then we wrote penalty for other teams then we picked the penalty. We picked singing IU(singer)'s song for 1 minute and dance Moo-ruck-Moo-ruck dance. Moo-ruck-Moo-ruck dance is put our hands up and down in 2:00 clock and 10:00 clock ways. Oh no!
We did a spped game. We should call the answers first. There are 4 teams and one time will do the penalty. Our team name is give me food! pretty funny. We were in the 2nd place. The last team sang Lucifer song. It was funny because they don't know the lyrics.
강사 첨삭
Hello Joey,
Sounds really fun. You guys must have had a good time in your English academy. It was kind of funny for me,
especially when you wrote about the Moo-Ruck Moo-Ruck dance and the name of your team. Talk to you later.
-RJ
In the morning I went to my english academy to study grammer.>>In the morning I went to my English academy to study grammar.
Today. we had a funny game. First had divided into teams.
>>Today. we had a fun game. First, we were divided into teams.
Then we wrote penalty for other teams then we picked the penalty. We picked singing IU(singer)'s song for 1 minute and dance Moo-ruck-Moo-ruck dance.
>>Then we wrote a penalty for the other teams and drew lots. We picked singing IU's song for a minute while dancing the Moo-ruck Moo-ruck dance.
Moo-ruck-Moo-ruck dance is put our hands up and down in 2:00 clock and 10:00 clock ways. Oh no!
>>The Moo-ruck-Moo-ruck dance is done by putting our hands up and down in 2:00 o' clock and 10:00 o'clock directions. Oh no!
We did a spped game. We should give the answers first. There are 4 teams and each team will do the penalty once.
>>The Moo-ruck-Moo-ruck dance is done by putting our hands up and down in 2:00 o' clock and 10:00 o'clock directions. Oh no!
We did a spped game. We should give the answers first. There are 4 teams and each team will do the penalty once.
>>We did a speed game. We should call the answers first. There are 4 teams and one time will do the penalty.
Our team name is give me food! pretty funny. We were in the 2nd place.
>>Our team's name is Give Me Food! Pretty funny. We were in the 2nd place.
The last team sang Lucifer song. It was funny because they don't know the lyrics.
>>correct
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