English and child
학생이 쓴 원문
It is good for children that they can do a lot of experience as possible as during their childhood.
That is natural and normal .
But in English education in Korea, we lost logical judgement and rational thought..
So government should regulate the crazy people who pursue only to gain the high English score .
Children are learning English from the third grade in public school, but crazy moms haven\'t been satisfied.
강사 첨삭
Ms [이름]!
Yes, I agree with you. Nowadays, many parents are enrolling their children in different academies, thinking that it would help the children. So many kids these days are tired of competition because of their parents. I hope that the world will see this problem and slow down like before.
Aki~
It is good for children that they can do a lot of experience as possible as during their childhood.
>>> It is good for children that they can have a lot experience as possible during their childhood.
That is natural and normal .
>>> CORRECT!
But in English education in Korea, we lost logical judgement and rational thought..
>>> But in English education in Korea, we lost logical judgment and rational thought.
So government should regulate the crazy people who pursue only to gain the high English score .
>>> So the government should regulate the crazy people who pursue only to gain a high English score.
Children are learning English from the third grade in public school, but crazy moms haven\'t been satisfied.
>>> Children are learning English from the third grade in public school, but crazy moms haven\'t been satisfied.
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