English competency and my life
학생이 쓴 원문
Our lives don\'t change and can\'t change due to one factor.
However, it is true that we can live a rich life by the influence of knowledge.
I am guessing how my life would be if I were very good at English.
I need English ability to do well my work which I am going to do in the future.
So to me speaking well English is not to change my life, but to develop my competency.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
Continue doing good work.
I can really depend on your consistency.
I look forward to see you blossom and your skills develop.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Our lives don\'t change and can\'t change due to one factor.
>> Correct
However, it is true that we can live a rich life by the influence of knowledge.
However, it is true that we can live a rich life by the influence of knowledge.
>> Correct
I am guessing how my life would be if I were very good at English.
I am guessing how my life would be if I were very good at English.
>> Correct
I need English ability to do well my work which I am going to do in the future.
I need English ability to do well my work which I am going to do in the future.
>> I need English ability to do well in the work which I am going to do in the future.
So to me speaking well English is not to change my life, but to develop my competency.
So to me speaking well English is not to change my life, but to develop my competency.
>> So to me speaking in English well is not to change my life, but to develop my competency.
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