English composition

Yesterday, I wrote down my first diary with English composition to this website. But it has goon. I don't know the reason why it was goon. Anyway, I am okay. I sent one email to our client. The email is as below. I attached several files including piping, HVAC and electric. Even though we do our best, we should exclude several items like clean room, TAB and etc. Please check out our quotation clearly and let me know your opinion. Best regards, [이름] It is construction work for Saudi. If we get this award, I will be there in near future. I heard that Saudi has 3 prohibitions like [이름]chi, Alcohole and Girl. Girl means that I could not see any girl in the street when I visited last month. So it is not good contion for worker to work there in which has high temperature.

Hello Mr. [이름]^^ I actually read your composition yesterday and I even corrected it. I also don't know what happened to your composition. because we can't delete the students' compositions in our website. So I really have no idea why it's gone. Anyway, I know about that prohibitions in Saudi Arabia. In fact, my dad worked there when I was young and we lived there for a year.hehehe. I'll tell you about it during class. See you later! ~Ella   MY CORRECTIONS^^: Yesterday, I wrote down my first diary with English composition to this website. ] >>Yesterday, I wrote my first diary in English on this website. But it has goon. >>But it's gone. I don't know the reason why it was goon. >>I don't know the reason why it didn't get uploaded.Anyway, I am okay. >>Anyway, it's okay.I sent one email to our client. >>CORRECT :) >>I sent an email to our client. -->> BETTER The email is as below. >>The email is written below.I attached several files including piping, HVAC and electric. >>CORRECT :)Even though we do our best, we should exclude several items like clean room, TAB and etc. >>Even though we our doing our best, we should still exert more effort on several items like clean room maintenance, TAB, and etc.Please check out our quotation clearly and let me know your opinion. >>CORRECT :)Best regards, [이름] >>CORRECT :) >>but it should be written like this. Best regards, [이름]It is construction work for Saudi. >>It is a construction project for Saudi. If we get this award, I will be there in near future. >>If we get this project, I will be there in the near future.  I heard that Saudi has 3 prohibitions like [이름]chi, Alcohole and Girl. >>I heard that Saudi has 3 prohibitions namely [이름]chi, alcohol, and girls. >>I heard that Saudi prohibits three things which are kinchi, alcohol, and girls. Girl means that I could not see any girl in the street when I visited last month. >>By girls, I mean could not see any girl on the street where I visited last month.So it is not good contion for worker to work there in which has high temperature. >>So it is not a good condition for a worker to work in that place which also has a high temperature.