English Homework 15

2021-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Oneil

학생이 쓴 원문

Since I was 11 years old, I learned in school class and after school club. Because I studied English to take a test well and communicate foreign people.

강사 첨삭

Since I was 11 years old, I learned in school class and after school club. 
>> Since I was 11 years old, I learned it in school class and after my school club. 

Because I studied English to take a test well and communicate foreign people.
>> I studied English for me to get a good score on my test and to be able to communicate with foreign people.

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