English Homework 18
학생이 쓴 원문
It is when the Joseon Dynasty. It is because I w[이름] to see Panokseon, which is Joseon Dynasty battle ship using Cheonja Chongtong Gun and made by wodden. I like Panokseon
강사 첨삭
It is when the Joseon Dynasty.
>> I would like to be at Joseon Dynasty.
It is because I w[이름] to see Panokseon, which is Joseon Dynasty battle ship using Cheonja Chongtong Gun and made by wooden.
>> It is because I w[이름] to see Panokseon, which is a Joseon Dynasty battleship using Cheonja160; Chongtong; it is a gun and made of wood.
I like Panokseon
>> I like Panokseon.
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