English Homework 23
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Not knowing about mordern dance, I reaserched the internet abuout it. According to the article about that, it is said that mordern dance is similar ballet, but it is more creative and freer than bellet.
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Hi, [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. You even did some research. Well done! See you in class!
~ Teacher Marie
Not knowing about mordern dance, I reaserched the internet abuout it.
>> Not knowing about modern dance, I searched the internet for it.
According to the article about that, it is said that mordern dance is similar ballet, but it is more creative and freer than bellet.
>> According to an article, modern dance is similar to ballet but it is more creative and freer.
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