English Homework 24

2021-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

My favorite song is \'once I was seven years old \', what Lukas Graham sing. The content of the song is about age. I think it is magnificent because I can feel cheerful and it give me to feel like thinking of past.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! I love that song, too. I agree with you. Listening to it makes people smile while thinking about the past. Have a great day and I\'ll see you tomorrow!

~ Teacher Marie

My favorite song is \'once I was seven years old \', what Lukas Graham sing.

>> My favorite song is \"7 Years\" by Lukas Graham.

The content of the song is about age.

>> The song is about one\'s age.

I think it is magnificent because I can feel cheerful and it give me to feel like thinking of past.

>> I think it is magnificent because it makes me feel cheerful and think of the past.

OR: I think it is magnificent because it makes me feel cheerful and nostalgic of the past.

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