English Homework 24
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I agree. It is because music is our one of tradition. Music can share feelings, which are happy, sad, funny. So, I think mucis cure heart.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! Thank you for your answer. I agree with you when you say that music can cure our hearts. Have a happy weekend and see you next time!
~ Teacher Marie
Yes, I agree.
>> CORRECT.
It is because music is our one of tradition.
>> It is because music is one of our traditions.
OR: It is because music is part of our tradition.
Music can share feelings, which are happy, sad, funny.
>> Music can give us feeling of happiness, and sadness; and can bring fun.
So, I think mucis cure heart
>> So, I think music cures the heart.
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