English Homework 27

2021-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

My way making omelets first mix three eggs, second bake mixed eggs, and last roll three times omelets. I think it is hard for me to roll omelets. In addition, I usually make a omelet with two pieces of cheeses

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! Thank you for sharing your omelet recipe. I will surely try this! See you in class!

~ Teacher Marie

My way making omelets

>> My way of making an omelet:

first mix three eggs, second bake mixed eggs, and last roll three times omelets.

>> First, beat three eggs. Second, cook the beaten eggs and last, roll it three times.

I think it is hard for me to roll omelets.

>> I think it is hard for me to roll an omelet.

OR: I find it hard to roll an omelet.

In addition, I usually make a omelet with two pieces of cheeses

>> In addition, I usually make an omelet with two slices of cheese.



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