ENGLISH HOMEWORK 29
학생이 쓴 원문
What food can we eat to keep our teeth healthy?
We can eat calcium food for it. For instance, there is Shank Bone Soup, milk, Grilled Eel. But I think it is import[이름] to keep eaing habits
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this. Nice work! I look forward to our next class!
~ Teacher Marie
What food can we eat to keep our teeth healthy?
>> CORRECT.
We can eat calcium food for it.
>> We can eat food that are rich in calcium.
For instance, there is Shank Bone Soup, milk, Grilled Eel.
>> For instance, shank bone soup, grilled eel, and milk.
But I think it is import[이름] to keep eaing habits
>> I think it is import[이름] to have healthy eating habits.
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