English Homework 31

2021-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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When was the last time you had a nightmare and what was it about? The last time I had a nightmare is last year. In the situation, there was a very dark. I lay my bed in may room. And suddenly my mother appear horribly. Obviously, my heart sank though I was in the dream. Mom said that because of stress.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! I can only imagine how bad you must have felt waking up from that dream. I\'m sorry to hear that. I hope you only get nice dreams in the future. That\'s not in our hands, but there\'s nothing wrong with expecting for the best!
~ Teacher Marie
When was the last time you had a nightmare and what was it about?
>> CORRECT.
The last time I had a nightmare is last year. 
>> The last time I had a nightmare was last year.

In the situation, there was a very dark.

>> In my dream, it was very dark.

I lay my bed in may room.

>> I was lying on the bed in my room.

And suddenly my mother appear horribly.

>> And suddenly, my mother appeared horribly.

Obviously, my heart sank though I was in the dream.

>> Obviously, my heart sank even though it was just a dream.

Mom said that because of stress.

>> My mom said that it was because of stress .

OR: My mom said that it might be because of stress that I had that a nightmare.

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