ENGLISH HOMEWORK 8
학생이 쓴 원문
I would like to receive a new phone this Christmas. Because I have a my phone whose screen is cracked, and I w[이름] to take a clear picture with phone. If I receive a new phone, I will take pictures of stars.
강사 첨삭
I would like to receive a new phone this Christmas.
>> Correct.
Because I have a my phone whose screen is cracked, and I w[이름] to take a clear picture with phone.
>> It is because my phone\'s screen is cracked, and I w[이름] to take a clear picture with my phone.
If I receive a new phone, I will take pictures of stars.
>> If I receive a new phone, I will take pictures of the stars.
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