English is essential for my life.
학생이 쓴 원문
> Why is English fluency significant for you?
Nowadays English ability is important for Koreans. There are some reasons for that.
Firstly English is one of the main evaluation factor if you want to apply something like a company, university and so on. If you want to get a good job, if you want to enter a university which you want, you should get a high score about English. And for me as well.
Secondly if i want to promote, English is essential qualification. Specific TOEIC speaking score is needed to promote upwards.
And lastly I am working as sales engineer. So English is important skill to communicate with my customers.
Those are the reasons why English is important for me.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir JY. Thank you for this. English fluency is indeed necessary in this global world. Good luck!
- T. Beth
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>>>> correct.
>>>> OR: Nowadays English communication ability is important for Koreans.
There are some reasons for that.
>>>> correct
>>>> OR: Here are some reasons for that.
Firstly English is one of the main evaluation factor if you want to apply something like a company, university and so on.
Firstly English is one of the main evaluation factor if you want to apply something like a company, university and so on.
>>>> Firstly, English is one of the main evaluation factor if you want to apply somewhere like in a company, university and so on.
If you want to get a good job, if you want to enter a university which you want, you should get a high score about English. And for me as well.
>>>> If you want to get a good job or to enter a university which you want, you should get a high score in English test. And that goes for me, as well.
Secondly if i want to promote, English is essential qualification.
>>>> Secondly, if I want to be promoted, English is an essential qualification.
Specific TOEIC speaking score is needed to promote upwards.
>>>> A specific TOEIC speaking score is needed to get promoted.
And lastly I am working as sales engineer.
>>>> And lastly, I am working as a sales engineer.
So English is important skill to communicate with my customers.
>>>> So English fluency is an important skill to communicate with my customers.
Those are the reasons why English is important for me.
>>>> correct
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