English Lerning with Internet
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Su ^^
Definitely. Right now, I\'m just submitting this composition through the Internet.
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Like contacting with my English teacher in Philippines, Internet has plenty of advantages.
>>> Like getting in touch with my teacher from the Philippines, internet has its advantages.
We can surf in the Internet full of Englisch contents.
>>> We can surf the internet and it will show us all of its contents.
For example, I have subscribed a YouTube channel with a moderator who is English native speaker.
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With his video, I can practice daily expressions and writing skills while writing a comment.
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Furthermore, he developed an application for English education, so who wants more can easily widen their vocabulary.
>>> Furthermore, he developed an application for English education, so whoever wants more can easily widen their vocabulary.
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