English Letter

2015-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Teacher this day I am too busy and I can't see a homework so I write a English Letter. Dear, Eric Do you get along to your my classmate? Several my team's student make me angry.They shouted at my friend and I.I and my friend are revenge them.Also,we shouted them too.How about your classmates team?I am annoy at my classmate in my team.They are very selfish.I hate selfish person.See you on Sunday. [이름].

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], Good evening! It\'s a good thing that you decided to write an English letter to express your feeling. I can sense that you are not getting along with some of your classmates. It usually happens to everyone. Remember that we cannot please everybody. If they will continue to fight with you, it\'s better to get some help from your teachers. I hope that everything will turn out fine. See you on Tuesday! If you have time, please look into the correction I have noted. Teacher Liza   Teacher this day I am too busy and I can\'t see a homework so I write a English Letter. >>Teacher, today I was so busy and I didn\'t see a homework so I decided to write an English letter.  Dear, Eric >>Dear [Name], Do you get along to your my classmate? >> Do you get along with your classmates? Several my team\'s student make me angry. >>YOU MEAN TO SAY: Most of my classmates in our class make me angry. They shouted at my friend and I. >>They shouted at me and my friend. I and my friend are revenge them. >> My friend and I did a revenge to them. >> OR: My friend and I fought back at them. Also,we shouted them too. >>We also shouted back at them. >>OR: We also shouted back. How about your classmates team? >>How about your classmates? I am annoy at my classmate in my team. >>I am annoyed with my classmates. >>OR: I am annoyed with my classmates in our class. >> OR: I got pissed off with them. They are very selfish. >>Correct I hate selfish person. >>I hate a selfish person. >>OR: I hate selfish people. See you on Sunday. >>Correct  [이름]. >>[이름]   >> OR:  You friend,              [이름]

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