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Dear [Name]
I was a speaker at Bio-Rad. I went to Taiwan 17 years ago. I am working for marketing at that time. So I made a presentation file for our market stradegy. I present it in front of my gloval staffs.
As you know I can\'t speak well, so It was very difficult time. Especially, India person asked me something, I did not understand what she said. Several time I hrard her voice repeatedly, but I can\'t.
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Hi [이름]!
Enjoy the weekends and I\'ll talk to you on Monday.
T. DON
Dear [Name]
I was a speaker at Bio-Rad. I went to Taiwan 17 years ago.
I was a speaker at Bio-Rad. I went to Taiwan 17 years ago.
>> CORRECT
I am working for marketing at that time.
>> CORRECT
So I made a presentation file for our market stradegy. I present it in front of my gloval staffs.
>> So I made a presentation file for our marketing strategy. I present it in front of my global staffs.
As you know I can\'t speak well, so It was very difficult time.
>> As you know, I can\'t speak well so It was very difficult for me.
Especially, India person asked me something, I did not understand what she said. Several time I hrard her voice repeatedly, but I can\'t.
>> Especially when Indians or people from India asked me something. I did not understand what she said. I tried to listen carefully to what she is saying but I couldn\'t really understand her.
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