English Speaking Test
학생이 쓴 원문
Niagara Falls is a place I want to visit at least once.
Niagara Falls is the strongest of North American waterfalls.
Let me introduce why I want to go there in connection with this.
First,it was the most beautiful waterfall I\'ve ever seen on the Internet.
When the water was pouring down, the charm of the Niagara Falls was fantastic.
Second,I saw people sightseeing there on TV and it looked very interesting.
It looked so good for them to have a happy time in the water.
I\'ll introduce what I really want to do there next in this regard.
First, I want to take a commemorative photo with my family and make a memory.
Second, when a boat gets close to the waterfall,I\'d like to go to a place where there\'s a lot of water.
I hope the day I travel with my family will be such a happy time as I imagined.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Sarah!
Thank you for submitting your script!
You did well on this one. I just also provided some suggestions.
I hope this helps. ^^
See you later! Have a good day!
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
Niagara Falls is the strongest of North American waterfalls.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Niagara Falls has the strongest current among North American waterfalls.
Let me introduce why I want to go there in connection with this.
Let me introduce why I want to go there in connection with this.
>> CORRECT.
First, it was the most beautiful waterfall I\'ve ever seen on the Internet.
First, it was the most beautiful waterfall I\'ve ever seen on the Internet.
>> CORRECT.
When the water was pouring down, the charm of the Niagara Falls was fantastic.
When the water was pouring down, the charm of the Niagara Falls was fantastic.
>> When the water was pouring down, the charm of Niagara Falls was fantastic.
Second, I saw people sightseeing there on TV and it looked very interesting.
Second, I saw people sightseeing there on TV and it looked very interesting.
>> CORRECT.
It looked so good for them to have a happy time in the water.
It looked so good for them to have a happy time in the water.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: It looked so good seeing them have a happy time in the water.
I\'ll introduce what I really want to do there next in this regard.
I\'ll introduce what I really want to do there next in this regard.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: In this regard, I\'ll tell you the things I want to do there.
First, I want to take a commemorative photo with my family and make a memory.
First, I want to take a commemorative photo with my family and make a memory.
>> CORRECT.
Second, when a boat gets close to the waterfall, I\'d like to go to a place where there\'s a lot of water.
Second, when a boat gets close to the waterfall, I\'d like to go to a place where there\'s a lot of water.
>> Second, I\'d like to go to a place where there\'s a lot of water when the boat gets close to the waterfall.
I hope the day I travel with my family will be such a happy time as I imagined.
I hope the day I travel with my family will be such a happy time as I imagined.
>> CORRECT.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.