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When I had been staied over than 30 days in foreign country, I have eat a meal and visited my new friends then I think that need to try and learn a country's culture and their lifestyle. But I felt keenly the necessity of English because I couldn't have a talk in depth. So, I have made up my mind to study English. I've my ways to use the private educational institute and medium, But I like Korea National Open University(KNOU) because a very systematic approach to study in English, a remote system that I could study in English by working a job and the results was graded the effort. Finally, I chose the KNOU then challenged for myself.

Hi [이름], That's a good challenge that you have to face. Be positive and look forward on what you are going to achieve. As the saying goes that "what you reap is what you sow" Do good and I'm sure you will be on top of your dream in no time. Here are the corrections. Take care, - Connie -   When I had been staied over than 30 days in foreign country, I have eat a meal and visited my new friends then I think that need to try and learn a country's culture and their lifestyle. >> When I stayed in a foreign country for 30 days, I ate their food and I visited my new friends. I think I need to try to learn another country's culture and their lifestyle. But I felt keenly the necessity of English because I couldn't have a talk in depth. >> I felt keenly the necessity of English so I can communicate very well. So, I have made up my mind to study English. >> So, I make up my mind to study English. I've my ways to use the private educational institute and medium, But I like Korea National Open University(KNOU) because a very systematic approach to study in English, a remote system that I could study in English by working a job and the results was graded the effort. >> I found ways through Private Educational Institute as a medium. >> However, I like Korea National Open University (KNOU) because of their systematic approach in studying English. Finally, I chose the KNOU then challenged for myself. >> Finally, I chose the KNOU as a challenged for myself.