English study in Korea.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the way of studying English in Korea is ineffective.
On the average , one student in korea studies English for more than
10 years.
But most of students are poor at English.
There are several problems.
Most of all , there are many people in a class.
When I was in middleschool, there are about 50 students in a class.
It was a difficult atmosphere for me to concentrate on the class.
And we studied English for only getting a good score in a exam.
There wasn't any speaking test.
It was really wrong way.
강사 첨삭
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Keep up the good work my dear [이름].
Talk to you again tomorrow.
T.Cam
I think the way of studying English in Korea is ineffective.
>>correct!On the average , one student in korea studies English for more than10 years.
>>correct!But most of students are poor at English.
>>But most students are poor in English.There are several problems.
>>correct!Most of all , there are many people in a class.
>>correct!When I was in middleschool, there are about 50 students in a class.
>>correct!It was a difficult atmosphere for me to concentrate on the class.
>>It was a difficult atmosphere for me to concentrate in the class.And we studied English for only getting a good score in a exam.
>>correct!There wasn't any speaking test.
>>correct!It was really wrong way.
>>It was really a wrong way.
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