English teacher at church.

2019-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

I had a class with english teacher last Sunday. He is a Korean but he lived at U.S. for 15years. So, some students will have a class with him for 1hour at church. He recently went to my church. And he wants to volunteer for my church. So, he decided to have a english class. It\'s not a class because the purpose this class is freetalking and learning expressions. I think the first class was too fun.

강사 첨삭

I had a class with english teacher last Sunday.

>> I had a class with an English teacher las Sunday.

He is a Korean but he lived at U.S. for 15years.

>> HE is a Korean but he lived in the US for 15 years.

So, some students will have a class with him for 1hour at church.

>> Correct

He recently went to my church. And he wants to volunteer for my church.

>> He recently attended my church and he wants to volunteer for my church.

>> he recently attended our church and wants to volunteer to teach.

So, he decided to have a english class.

>> So, he decided to have an English class.

It\'s not a class because the purpose this class is freetalking and learning expressions.

>> Correct

I think the first class was too fun.

>>Correct

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기