English town

I came to English town to experince a foreign culture. My company planned this workshop to educate our members who belong to International exchange expert. When I arrived at this English town, I could see beautiful buildings and navtive English speakers. We got together more than 60 people around the country. As soon as I arrived, I registered at the name list , and I assigned my room and my room key. I unpacked my luggage at the room. After I had lunch with my coworkers, we started our class from 1 PM. The first teacher was the lady from South Africa republic. We had a various kind of activities. For example Conversation, Facility, Presentation basics, Cooking. I tried to speak English all the my classtime whether I spoke English corretly or not.

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I came to English town to experince a foreign culture.

>> I came to an English town to experience a foreign culture.

My company planned this workshop to educate our members who belong to International exchange expert.

>> My company planned this workshop to educate our members who belong to the International Exchange Expert.

When I arrived at this English town, I could see beautiful buildings and navtive English speakers.

>> When I arrived to this English town, I saw beautiful buildings and native English speakers.

We got together more than 60 people around the country.

>>More than 60 people around the country got together.

As soon as I arrived, I registered at the name list, and I assigned my room and my room key.

 unpacked my luggage at the room.

>> As soon as I arrived, I registered at the name list, got assigned to my room and got my room key,and unpacked my luggage at the room.

After I had lunch with my coworkers, we started our class from 1 PM.

>> After I had lunch with my coworkers, we started our class at 1pm.

The first teacher was the lady from South Africa republic.

>> The first teacher was the lady from The Republic of South Africa.

We had a various kind of activities.

>>Correct.

 For example Conversation, Facility, Presentation basics, Cooking.

>> For example: Conversation, Facility, Presentation Basics, and Cooking.

I tried to speak English all the my classtime whether I spoke English corretly or not.

>> I tried to speak English with all my class times whether correctly or not.