English village

2012-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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I visit English village last week,from wednesday to friday.for two nights and three days.it was interesting and great. But meals was not good.and meals most horrible in the world I think. BUt I ate all of them.Because meals madans made a meals that's why? Also the room was not good too.just a little.In our cases the beds was creak. But institutions was very good.restrooms,halls,market and classes. I want to go there any other times. And I learn something. It isn't afraid to talk to Amacrica teachers. That's are I learn somthing is.

강사 첨삭

Hello Justin! Wow. Great job here! There were some minor grammar slips here and there so please review them. I\'m glad you learned something from that trip even though you did not enjoy your stay. I hope you can have next time! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ I visit English village last week,from wednesday to friday. >> I visited the English village last week, from Wednesday to Friday. for two nights and three days. >> I stayed there for two nights and three days. it was interesting and great. >> correct OR >> It was interesting and great.But meals was not good.and meals most horrible in the world I think. >> But the meals were not that good. I think it was the most terrible meal I\'ve ever had.BUt I ate all of them. >> correct Because meals madans made a meals that\'s why? >> Because some ladies made them.Also the room was not good too. >> The room was not that good too. just a little. >> It was just okay. In our cases the beds was creak. >> In our case, the bed was creaking.But institutions was very good. >> However, the institution was very good. restrooms,halls,market and classes. >> The restrooms, halls, market and the classes were all good.I want to go there any other times. >> I want to go back there some other time.And I learn something. >> I learned something too.It isn\'t afraid to talk to Amacrica teachers. >> I learned not to be afraid to talk to American teachers.That\'s are I learn somthing is. >> That\'s what I learned in this trip.

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