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2019-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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I spoke on the phone with my sister a few minutes ago , so I didnt get your phonecall I was born in Cheongju, south Korea Im here in Seoul, south Korea I haven`t been other country since I was born, exclusively travel That`s why my english accent is terrible~ Seoul people`s accent is different from other location of korea They are tend to speak very fast, accurate and inflective

강사 첨삭

Hi Mi Jin! Thank you for sharing your thoughts! ^ ^
No worries about it! I appreciate your effort in writing this! Thank you! ^ ^ 

I spoke on the phone with my sister a few minutes ago , so I didn\'t get your phone call
>>CORRECT
I was born in Cheongju, South Korea.
>>CORRECT
Im here in Seoul, south Korea
>>I\'m now living in Seoul, South Korea.
I haven`t been other country since I was born, exclusively travel
>>I haven`t been to other countries since I was born, or traveled exclusively.
That`s why my English accent is terrible~
>>CORRECT
Seoul people`s accent is different from other location of korea
>>People from Seoul have a distinct accent compared to other cities/places in Korea.
They are tend to speak very fast, accurate and inflective
>>They tend to speak fast, accurate and with inflection.

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